Wonder
WonderDo you ever wonder what i'm doing at any momentdoes anything ever remind you of me from beforedo you ever miss me so much you would do anythingand would drop everything if i walked through your...
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This is nicely done, Ashley. I like how you have repeated the 1st stanza in the last one, with those minor changes. I do that myself often. It ties the whole piece together. As I read this, I kept...
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Thank you lots! i appreciate all of your suggestions and I will try all of them out and see what happens again lots of love and God bless you.ash
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Ashley...I like what you've said here and the way you chose to say it is quite effective. I think the repetion of before /door is a good means of stressing the thought. There is no regular meter in...
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Dear Ashley,The thought here is well expressed and though the meter isn't perfect, it seems to me that you've got a poet's mind and heart and the formal parts can be polished at your leisure.I am of...
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I responded to all of your responses to this poem I wrote, I took each one of your critique's and re wrote Wonder. Let me know what you think and if you agree with changes that I have made or if you...
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